Obliques practice take two which means im done with the front torso muscles now. I definitely fucked up 3 and 4 by refusing to use another page for those two but ah well. Also the text by 5 is "missing dynamism" basically i felt i didnt do the gesture justice on that one the torso is too straight vertical when it should be more diagonal. I also feel like its not obvious I was focusing on the obliques but I was! Trying to see where it touches the abs and the bump of the flank portion yknow... My problem is of course the usual of im really messy for some reason. Will I ever be able to draw cleanly we'll fucking see lol.